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Từ vựng và bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic: Curfews

Question: Some countries are considering imposing curfews in which teenagers will not be allowed outdoors at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this policy?

Some governments are considering proposals to institute curfews for teenagers that would require them to be in the presence of an adult after certain hours. In my opinion, the marginal benefits of such a policy would be greatly outweighed by its social drawbacks.

One the one hand, requiring teenagers to remain at home at night could help curb juvenile delinquency. In certain cities, it is common for particular neighborhoods to be full of criminal activity late at night. A teenager who is either engaging in such activity or simply passing through those areas is at significant riskBy staying home, teenagers would be forced to engage in more wholesome activities and the authorities would be better able to police the streets. In this way, governments could limit both crimes commited by and upon teenagers.

However, the cases mentioned above affect a minority of teenagers while this reform would impair the social growth of the majorityEnsuring teenagers stay home essentially limits their social acquaintances to within their familyIn many situations, if the family is small or there are issues related to abuse, this could foster an  unhealthy psychological and social dependence. When teenagers hang out with friends at concerts, malls, parks, and other public venues they begin to develop their identity and manage the demands of interpersonal relationships. Any reforms that hinder such growth are negative for the progress of society more generally.

In conclusion, despite the positive effect a curfew would have on misbehavior, such suggestions should be ignored in order to guarantee the healthy social development of adolescents. There are less restrictive methods of  of reducing juvenile deliquency that could instead be considered.

Language

  • considering proposals thinking about policies
  • institute put into practice
  • curfews limits on time
  • teenagers those aged 13-19
  • require need
  • in the presence of around
  • adult people over 18
  • certain hours times at night
  • marginal benefits small advantages
  • policy law
  • greatly outweighed much stronger than
  • social drawbacks disadvantages related to society
  • one the one hand on one side
  • remain stay the same
  • curb juvenile delinquency limit crimes amongst younger people
  • common normal
  • particular neighborhoods certain areas
  • full of criminal activity lots of crime
  • late at night around midnight
  • engaging in doing
  • passing through going through
  • significant risk big chance
  • by staying home remaining at home
  • forced to must
  • engage do
  • wholesome activities innocent pasttimes
  • authorities people in charge
  • better able to police the streets can do a better job keeping order
  • limit control
  • crimes commited by and upon hurting other and being hurt
  • however but
  • cases mentioned above instances detailed earlier
  • minority not the majority
  • reform change
  • impair harm
  • social growth development in society
  • majority most of
  • ensuring making sure of
  • essentially limits basically controls
  • social acquaintances people you know
  • within their family relatives
  • in many situations in some cases
  • issues related to abuse problems having to do with physical and emotional harm
  • foster encourage
  • unhealthy psychological and social dependence needing others in a bad way
  • hang out spend time with
  • public venues places where everyone can do
  • begin to start to
  • identity recognize
  • manage the demands deal with the responsibilities
  • interpersonal relationships talking to and being around others
  • hinder impair
  • progress development
  • more generally overall
  • despite regardless of
  • misbehavior bad actions
  • suggestions advice
  • ignored not paid attention to
  • in order to so that
  • guarantee ensure
  • healthy social development of adolescents normal growth of young people
  • less restrictive methods not as controlling
  • reducing decreasing
  • instead rather than
  • considered thought about

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