Tổng hợp các bài mẫu Band 9 trong IELTS General Writing task 1

Trong bài thi IELTS Writing General Task 1, bạn sẽ được yêu cầu viết một lá thư. Đây có thể là một lá thư Formal (Trang trọng) hoặc là thư Informal(Thân mật).  Để nâng cao kỹ năng Writing thì đọc hay nói chính xác là tham khảo những bài mẫu đạt điểm cao sẽ là cách giúp các bạn có ý tưởng cho bản thân mình và biết cách phát triển ý tưởng tạo nên bài viết chất lượng.

Những bài mẫu dưới đây đều được chọn lọc theo các bài viết hay được đánh giá cao, sẽ cung cấp cho bạn cách triển khai ý đối với một đề bài như thế nào, dùng những từ, cụm từ nào để miêu tả hay.

Bằng cách phân tích từ bài mẫu, IELTS LINGO hy vọng sẽ giúp bạn có được nguồn tham khảo tốt, nâng cao trình Writing.

Tổng hợp các bài mẫu Band 9 trong IELTS General Writing task 1

Bài mẫu số 1

Bức thư dưới đây là một ví dụ về một bức thư thân mật của Band 9 gửi cho một người bạn.

Write a letter to your friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter:

  • Give a brief description of the business
  • Mention what you’d like to be there on the website
  • Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

Dear Evi,

How are you? I hope you and John are doing well. I can’t believe it’s been 2 years since our last vacation together!

I have been really busy with the new shop and thanks to word of mouth, sales are going great! In fact, I have even decided to have a website created for the store. Would you be interested in creating the site for me?

As you know, my store sells handmade silver jewelry. I have extended the range of products to include other handmade items like ceramic figurines. I want the site to really capture the feeling of the store, which as you probably remember is kind of exotic, with souvenirs from my travels around the world. 

Since I update my merchandise regularly, the site will need to reflect that. I have recently bought a very high quality camera and some studio equipment so I am able to photograph the products myself. I just need you to set the site up and upload new photographs as they become available.

Do you think you can do this? I’d love to hear your thoughts! Of course, I don’t expect you to work for free; you’ll have to charge me what you would charge any client, regardless of our friendship.

I am really excited about this new adventure. I hope to hear from you soon!

Love,

Jane

Bài mẫu số 2

Write a letter to a company to ask about having them develop a website for your business. In your letter:

– Give a brief description of the business

– Explain what you’d like to be there on the website

– Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

Dear Mr. Glazer,

I am writing with regard to your services as a website designer. I have recently seen numerous samples of your work and I would like to enquire about utilizing your services for my new website.

I am a jewelry designer and proprietor of a retail business selling my creations. The designs, as well as the store, have an image that has been called “exotic,” by many customers. For this reason, I would like the website to reflect this characterization.

One challenge that I foresee with the site is that it must be updated regularly. This is because I frequently create new designs that must be visible to existing and potential customers. I possess some studio equipment, therefore, I am capable of photographing the items myself. However, I would like you to design the site and then upload new content regularly.

I would like to you to provide me an offer, including prices by email. I am available at the above phone number for any further clarifications you may need.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Jane Hart

Bài mẫu số 3

Write a letter to your friend who lives in a different country about your plan to work overseas. In your letter explain:

  • What jobs do you plan to do?
  • Why do you want to work overseas?
  • Ask for some information related to jobs, such as salary, working hours and so on

Dear John,

How are you? How are Melody and Emily? I hope everything is going well. I wanted to write you about some plans I have and I was hoping you could help.

Ever since I visited you last fall, I cannot stop thinking about how much I love Greece and how I would like to spend some more time there. So, I have decided to move there for a year! As you know, I have a degree in English so, I thought I could teach English as a foreign language. This experience will be great for my career since international experience is a highly sought qualification. If that is not possible, perhaps I could work for a family as a nanny. You know I love to work with kids so I would be happy in that kind of setting too.

Could you give me some information about how easy it would be for me to get a job there? Also, what are salaries like there in both professions? Would the money be able to cover housing and living expenses? I have read that nannies have irregular hours, sometimes even 7 days a week, but what about teachers? Do they have day or evening hours?

I am hoping to make the move this coming fall so any insights you could give me would be great. I am really excited about this and can’t wait to be closer to you and your family! Talk soon!

Love,

Anna

Bài mẫu số 4

You recently completed a course and you borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn’t return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher and say:

  • What book was it?
  • How helpful was the book?
  • Explain why you couldn’t return it in time.

Dear Mr. Rice,

I hope you are well. I am writing to thank you for lending me your copy of Practical English Usage and tell you how helpful it has been. Although our course ended last week, I would like to arrange a date and time to return the book to you.

You referred to this book often during our English classes but I was unable to secure a copy from our local bookstore. So, your offer to lend me the book to study from has been very gracious. You were absolutely right when you said the book covers every grammar point that many grammar books fail to address. I have found many answers to questions I had about English so I feel like this book has been a blessing!

I am so sorry I couldn’t return the book to you before our course ended but my roommate accidentally took my backpack on a weekend trip with him and the book was inside the bag!! Imagine my shock! Fortunately, he – and the book- have returned so I would like to give it back to you.

Please let me know what day this week is convenient for me to stop by the school to bring you the book.

Thank you once again!

Sincerely,

Juan Diaz

Trên đây là những bài mẫu IELTS WRITING GENERAL TASK1 bạn có thể tham khảo. Bằng cách phân tích từ bài mẫu, IELTS LINGO hy vọng sẽ giúp bạn có được nguồn tham khảo tốt, nâng cao trình Writing. Đừng quên cập nhật những kiến thức IELTS cực hay tại IELTS LINGO nhé!

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