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1. Từ vựng chủ đề Health trong IELTS Writing
- excessive consumption of…:việc tiêu thụ quá mức…
- sedentary lifestyles:lối sống thụ động
- fast food – junk food(đồ ăn vặt) – pre-made food (thức ăn được chuẩn bị sẵn)
- to have a healthy diet = to have a balanced diet:có 1 chế độ ăn lành mạnh, cân bằng
- to have an unhealthy diet = to have an imbalanced diet:có 1 chế độ ăn không lành mạnh, không cân bằng
- to take part in = to participate in = to engage in:tham gia vào
- weight gain:sự tăng cân
- weight problems:các vấn đề về cân nặng
- obesity (n):sự béo phì
- childhood obesity = obesity among children: béo phì ở trẻ em
- to take regular exercise:tập thể dục thường xuyên
- physical activity:hoạt động thể chất
- to make healthier food choices:lựa chọn thực phẩm lành mạnh hơn
- public health campaigns: các chiến dịch sức khỏe cộng đồng
- to suffer from various health issues:mắc hàng loạt các vấn đề về sức khỏe
- home-cooked food:thức ăn được nấu tại nhà
- to be at a higher risk of heart diseases:tỷ lệ cao mắc phải bệnh tim
- average life expectancy:tuổi thọ trung bình
- treatment costs:chi phí chữa trị
- the prevalence of fast food and processed food:việc thịnh hành của thức ăn nhanh và các thức ăn được chế biến sẵn.
- to raise public awareness:nâng cao ý thức cộng đồng
- to try to eat more vegetables and fruit:cố gắng ăn nhiều rau củ quả và trái cây
- healthy eating: ăn uống lành mạnh
- health risks: các nguy cơ gây hại cho sức khỏe
- highly addictive ingredients: các thành phần gây nghiện cao
- to improve public health: cải thiện sức khỏe cộng đồng
- proper health education: giáo dục sức khỏe tốt
- greatly enhanced: được nâng cao đáng kể
- It is an undeniable fact that: có 1 sự thật không thể phủ nhận là
- fitness levels: mức độ thể chất
- gives people more chances to: cho người ta nhiều cơ hội hơn để làm gì
- keep fit: giữ dáng
- stay healthy: khỏe mạnh
- sports amenities: các cơ sở thể thao
- an annual gym membership: thể tập gym 1 năm
- educate citizens about: giáo dục người dân về vấn đề gì
- basic health awareness: nhận thức về sức khỏe cơ bản
- potential health problems: những vấn đề sức khỏe tiềm ẩn
- equipped with sufficient basic knowledge about: được trang bị với kiến thức cơ bản đầy đủ về vấn đề gì
- the adverse effects of: những ảnh hưởng có hại của
- take up this bad habit: tập thành thói quen xấu này
- Public campaigns: những chiến dịch cộng đồng
- health protection programmes: những chương trình bảo vệ sức khỏe
- raising public awareness: nâng cao ý thức cộng đồng
2. Bài mẫu chủ đề Health trong IELTS Writing
Sample 1:
It is argued that providing more sports centres or health clubs would be the most effective method for improving public health. From my point of view, however, proper health education would be a better measure.
On one hand, people’s health has been greatly enhanced thanks to participation in sports facilities. It is an undeniable fact that fitness levels are increased by taking part in physical activities such as doing daily exercise or playing sports. Therefore, the increasing popularity of gym classes or sports clubs gives people more chances to improve their health. After a hard day at work, many residents in my neighbourhood attend evening yoga classes in order to keep fit and stay healthy.
On the other hand, I would argue that increasing the provision of sports amenities would have little impact on public health. This can be explained by the fact that many people who paid for an annual gym membership failed to go entirely after just one month. Therefore, I think that it is more important to educate citizens about basic health awareness. A person would easily avoid some potential health problems if he is equipped with sufficient basic knowledge about medicine and health care. For example, when a child knows more about the adverse effects of smoking, he might be less likely to take up this bad habit in his adulthood. Public campaigns and health protection programmes, thus, should be promoted so that people know how to protect their health effectively.
In conclusion, the growing prevalence of sports facilities has brought a wide range of health benefits for people; yet, I personally believe that raising public awareness through health campaigns would have a more positive impact on improving people’s health.
Sample 2:
It is more important to spend public money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree?
Many people say that in order to fight diseases, the government should invest more money in encouraging a healthy lifestyle instead of spending money on the treatment of people who are already suffering from illness. I advocate this point of view.
On one hand, I agree that a large proportion of state budget should be allocated to activities or campaigns that promote a healthy lifestyle. This is because a lot of diseases nowadays are actually the direct result of people’s unhealthy habits. For example, children who eat fast food on a daily basis commonly can suffer from a range of health issues, such as weight problems and obesity. These diseases can be prevented if people are made more aware of the severe consequences of an unhealthy diet. In addition, there are a number of incurable diseases, such as HIV, AIDS and many forms of cancer. Of course, there are drugs and treatments that can prolong the life of patients suffering from such diseases, but the better solution in this case is obviously trying to prevent these diseases from occurring, instead of trying to cure them, which can often place a heavy burden on patients’ families, and on society as a whole.
On the other hand, the treatment for people who are already ill should also receive adequate funding, due to the fact that some diseases simply cannot be prevented. People living in many tropical or coastal regions, for example, are highly vulnerable to water-borne diseases after a natural disaster such as a tsunami or heavy flooding. Additionally, there are also some illnesses and disorders that are inherited. For instance, if a person suffers from asthma, it is highly likely that his children will also contract respiratory related diseases, regardless of their diet or lifestyle. These mentioned cases would be almost impossible for people or the government to prevent, and therefore money needs to be spent on the treatment of patients.
In conclusion, both promoting a healthy lifestyle and spending money on the treatment of people who are already ill are equally important in the fight against diseases, and each country should develop flexible plans to adapt to different situations.
Sample 3:
People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a duty for a society. What extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been argued that people today should care for their own personal health purely to enjoy the personal benefits that are gained from having good health, rather than as a duty to others in their society. Personally I believe that people should take good care of their health not only to reap the associated benefits, but also as a way of helping to uplift the lives of the citizens within their own cities and countries.
Many people claim that the secret to a happy life is through achieving and maintaining good health, and I also stand by this notion. When someone experiences good physical and mental health they are able to enjoy their life to the fullest. Good health allows people to pursue their hopes and dreams and enjoy human relationships with family and friends. Without good mental and physical health, these ideals are difficult to attain.
In addition to this, today, people are suffering from mental and physical sickness and diseases more so than ever before. This, in turn, causes a heavy load on a country’s healthcare industry and causes large financial burdens to the country’s national budget, which comes at the cost of the tax paying citizens. If people were to look after their health better, it would reduce such financial burdens and the money could then be spent on other services that would benefit the quality of life for the society as a whole.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that all people should strive to achieve and maintain the highest levels of health possible not only so that they can be happy and enjoy their own life, but also so that they can contribute towards a more happy and healthy society around them.
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